dislike your foes
hate your beloved
for hatred is love
take another shape
leaps of joy
sorrow deep drowned
find their roots
in love abound
reeks in no conditions
bound by no string
love stays undettered
timeless and enduring
insecure and dismal
prejudiced and possessive
when life wreaths fear
love showers hope
bright and clear
love is
when life is
life is not
when love isnt
This is not yet another poem! This is the poem the world has been waiting for so long..lets wait and see if it gets nominated for ...(can we say an award?)..Just kiddin Dee! Its rocking!
Too good!!
People who had experienced such things can understand the meaning of sorrow and joy you are talking about... In some cases, even though the things are simple in love, people make it complex with their own misunderstandings…
(These are not related to your post)
But Life and Love are much beyond words…
i am anonymous diffrent from one on this blog hey i think rise in love is necessary and thankful to the moment of love you got rather than ....making love as a disease.
yes..i understand what you say i am in love also but dear...life is in not in our control...i think in love you can change partner if there is no way to get your frist LOVE and make your life bigger and joyful.
1) "No way" is something that i don’t like. There is a way where there is a will. If you imagine yourself as a human, considering only one life, then you will come to know how precious your love was...and what you missed out!! Rules are created by man. They are going to change with time. Love is not bound to anything so there is no question of "no way” in love...
2) Seems like you are already decided to change and so you are saying something like "make your life happy and joyful with different partner"...
Life goes on whether you have your lover as partner or not, or even if you don’t have a partner at all, but life is a hell when your partner betrays you and insults you every time. Even if you can’t be partners, you can be good friends. Life is a hell when you take off happiness from your lover, who loves you very much…
oops!!!
2nd and 4th comment are from only one person and its me. I dont have a blog, so i had to act anonymous.
4th was in response to 3rd anonymous comment.
The last two lines would go
"love is not
when life isnt."
If it was up to me, that is.
Nice words. Keep them going.